Sunday, March 2, 2014

Essay Outline


Question: How does the Singapore government reduce the emission of greenhouse gases (GHGs) in Singapore to against global warming?

Thesis Statements: Singapore government has cutting down the emission of greenhouse gases (GHGs) to fight against the global warming by improve the energy efficient usage and raise the awareness.

Introduction- problem:  The global warming issue was getting serious nowadays, which caused the glaciers in the North and South Pole were melting and the sea levels were rising. All of these global warming effects were mostly caused by greenhouse gases (GHGs) that emitted by the human activities that used to build the modern lives of today. Majority of these GHGs were emitted from the buildings around us, fossil fuels in transportations, industries and electricity generator.

Introduction- Solution: the best solution to prevent this issue getting serious is to stabilize the concentration of GHGs and Singapore government has supporting it to fight against the global warming by cutting down the emission of GHGs from building and transportations.

Body Paragraph 1- Topic Sentence: Singapore government has been focused on cutting down the emission of GHGs from the transportations throughout the years.

Body Paragraph 1- Description of the problem: According to a data from National Climate Change Secretariat (NCCS), there are about 19% of CO2 emissions were contributed from transport in year 2005.

Body Paragraph 1- Description of one existing solution:

In order to reduce the emission of CO2, LTA was improving the energy efficiency of transport sector through varies solutions. First of all, LTA managing the vehicle usage and traffic congestion by implemented the Certificate of Entitlement (COE) and Electronic Road Pricing (ERP) to discouraged people to purchase a car. Next, LTA also continue improve and promote the public transport in order to make the public transport be the first choice of mode of transport for every people. Besides that, Singapore government also encourages people to buy green vehicles with the promotion of Green Vehicle Rebate (GVR) since 2001.

Body Paragraph 1- Evaluate the existing Solution:

Through these solutions, the Singapore government is expected to reduce the CO2 to 14.5% in 2020. Although the Singapore government managed to reduce the CO2 by providing an efficient transport system, but there are still a number of people refused to use the public transport due to overcrowded of the MRT during peak hours.

Body Paragraph 1- improvement on existing solution:

In my opinion, LTA can try to shorter the current waiting time of the train from about average 2miniutes to 30 seconds to increase the frequency of the train during peak hours. On the other hands, LTA can also collaborate with MOM and MOE to reduce the crowd of peak hours to attract more people to take public transport. For example, MOE can release the students from school at 5PM so that can reduce the overcrowded situation during peak hours.

Conclusion:

Problem: the global warming issue is getting more serious and many governments from different countries are started working hard to reduce carbon emission from their own country and this included Singapore government.

Solution: Throughout the years, Singapore government had work out many solutions to reduce the carbon emission from the transportation and building sectors.

Call to action: Thus, this is the time for every people to working with the government to protect our environment by response the call from Singapore government.
Reference:
National Geographic Society (1996-2014). Global Warming Solutions, Retrieved March 1, 2014,  http://environment.nationalgeographic.com/environment/global-warming/gw-solutions
National Climate Change Secretariat (2012), Projecting Singapore’s Greenhouse Gas Emissions, Retrieved March 1, 2014, http://app.nccs.gov.sg/nccs-2012/projecting-singapores-greenhouse-gas-emissions.html
 

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